Friday, January 16, 2009

I have no clue what to call this writing

This is...........revising!!!!!!! 
 O.k, remember your draft? Did you forget that something happened? Did you forget a piece of dialogue? NOW IS YOUR TIME TO FIX IT!
 other ways you can use this stage:
1. Similes
2. metaphors 
3. Forgot something?

PLEASE COMENT 

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

i love writing but i have too also say its hard to do that because sometimes you don't think its wrong but it is you know?

by the way this is maddy from your class:)